Talk:The Ed Sullivan Show

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I have some problems with the intro here. It's overly long and filled with editorial-style information. It's ok to say a show is groundbreaking, but to go on and on about it makes it seem like an opinion column. It should perhaps be trimmed to include only the information; which should help the length problem. To be more specific, the first and second paragraphs are fine. The third and fourth should be combined, IMO, and trimmed of their more editorial commentary. The last two paragraphs are my biggest problem. They should be reduced to the historical information, I believe. --MateoP 16:14, 14 August 2006 (EDT)

Whatever, dude, go for it. -- JCaesartalk 16:30, 14 August 2006 (EDT)
While you're in there, though, mind adding the sections (like "In-Depth" and "Cast" - even if the only cast member is Sullivan himself) which belong on every Show page? -- JCaesartalk 16:33, 14 August 2006 (EDT)